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BEAST!au Atsushi Nakajima ([personal profile] moonlightalter) wrote in [community profile] thefoundation 2020-08-28 03:34 am (UTC)

Hmm...maybe switching between the teacher and Sora another time in the story, then? Because having just one switch makes it more obvious that the switch was done to conceal of the previous relationship was true or not. But if the perspective switches more than once, it makes it feel more natural.

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