ugly_split_ends: (A girl can get somewhere)
Fukawa Touko (腐川冬子) / Genocider Shou (ジェノサイダー翔) ([personal profile] ugly_split_ends) wrote in [community profile] thefoundation 2020-08-23 04:58 am (UTC)

Hm. The reader is supposed to identify with her. So if they feel she can't do anything, they can't do anything... problematic.

[A short little pause.]

...Though, correct me if I'm wrong.

I know you're not the Atsushi Nakajima, but given your feedback, I get the idea you must do your own writing. Is that something you're interested in?

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